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	<title>Comments on: Where does the time go?</title>
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	<description>The literary struggle of a lazy part-time genius</description>
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		<title>By: Ben</title>
		<link>http://benleto.com/blog/503/where-does-the-time-go/comment-page-1/#comment-233</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 May 2007 14:39:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tempting my dear, thank you! I may very well take you up on that.&lt;br /&gt;
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I&#039;ve been working on this so long I can&#039;t see the Ts for their crosses anymore.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tempting my dear, thank you! I may very well take you up on that.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been working on this so long I can&#8217;t see the Ts for their crosses anymore.</p>
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		<title>By: peach</title>
		<link>http://benleto.com/blog/503/where-does-the-time-go/comment-page-1/#comment-232</link>
		<dc:creator>peach</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 May 2007 14:27:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hey ben&lt;br /&gt;
If you need another set of eyes I&#039;d be happy to look over anything and be your virtual underwriter !&lt;br /&gt;
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SX</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hey ben<br />
If you need another set of eyes I&#8217;d be happy to look over anything and be your virtual underwriter !</p>
<p>SX</p>
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		<title>By: Jon the alcoholic</title>
		<link>http://benleto.com/blog/503/where-does-the-time-go/comment-page-1/#comment-231</link>
		<dc:creator>Jon the alcoholic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 May 2007 14:19:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Get drunk. Do it to a copy of the synopsis. Look the next day to see if any of the more &#039;mind-liberated&#039; reductions are worth keeping.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Get drunk. Do it to a copy of the synopsis. Look the next day to see if any of the more &#8216;mind-liberated&#8217; reductions are worth keeping.</p>
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		<title>By: Ben</title>
		<link>http://benleto.com/blog/503/where-does-the-time-go/comment-page-1/#comment-230</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 May 2007 14:17:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alas, if only it were an academic piece, or even genre fiction. The novel is literary fiction, and thus much more dependent on character than plot. Thus it&#039;s difficult to know what&#039;s critical and what&#039;s superflous because the whole novel is about the emotional journey the characters go through.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the advice though, and particularly the encouragement - much needed. I&#039;m at three and a half pages now, but I fear I&#039;ll be having to continually edit this until it&#039;s on the back of a Kit Kat wrapper.&lt;br /&gt;
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I&#039;m just not a big picture person. I like details, exquisite little details.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alas, if only it were an academic piece, or even genre fiction. The novel is literary fiction, and thus much more dependent on character than plot. Thus it&#8217;s difficult to know what&#8217;s critical and what&#8217;s superflous because the whole novel is about the emotional journey the characters go through.</p>
<p>Thanks for the advice though, and particularly the encouragement &#8211; much needed. I&#8217;m at three and a half pages now, but I fear I&#8217;ll be having to continually edit this until it&#8217;s on the back of a Kit Kat wrapper.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m just not a big picture person. I like details, exquisite little details.</p>
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		<title>By: jeremy</title>
		<link>http://benleto.com/blog/503/where-does-the-time-go/comment-page-1/#comment-229</link>
		<dc:creator>jeremy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 May 2007 14:02:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ben&lt;br /&gt;
When I studied the Holocaust in the Fall of 2006, my professor made us write &quot;Precis&quot; that were no more than 1500 words based on reading &quot;Chapters&quot; of material. &lt;br /&gt;
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He was very strict on word count, When I read this, I was reminded of the subject of &quot;Precis&quot; a short synopsis based on poited material from the reading. Leaving all non-sensical informaiton out and focusing on the meat of the reading. &lt;br /&gt;
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You might try this and see if you cannot come inside your word count. Do not despair and keep writing.&lt;br /&gt;
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Jeremy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ben<br />
When I studied the Holocaust in the Fall of 2006, my professor made us write &quot;Precis&quot; that were no more than 1500 words based on reading &quot;Chapters&quot; of material. </p>
<p>He was very strict on word count, When I read this, I was reminded of the subject of &quot;Precis&quot; a short synopsis based on poited material from the reading. Leaving all non-sensical informaiton out and focusing on the meat of the reading. </p>
<p>You might try this and see if you cannot come inside your word count. Do not despair and keep writing.</p>
<p>Jeremy</p>
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